"സെന്റ് മേരീസ് ജി എച്ച് എസ് ചൊവ്വന്നൂർ/അക്ഷരവൃക്ഷം/Cleanliness" എന്ന താളിന്റെ പതിപ്പുകൾ തമ്മിലുള്ള വ്യത്യാസം

08:20, 19 ഏപ്രിൽ 2020-നു നിലവിലുള്ള രൂപം

Cleanliness

Once upon a time there lived a small young girl named Lisa. She was very naughty, not clean at all. when all her friends having fun playing in the water, she would sit alone. Unlike others she hated getting wet. One day due to heavy showers, there was muddy water everywhere. Lisa became dirty and mud was covered on her body. “oh no” I don’t like to dirty. When the rain stopped Lisa saw all her friends bathing in the river. Even she was also needed to bathe. She stepped into the river. All the mud was washed away. The water feels good. Said Lisa. Soon she found herself having fun with her friends. From that day on wards she started to bath and played along with her friends in river.

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8 B സെന്റ് മേരീസ് ജി എച്ച് എസ്‌ ചൊവ്വന്നൂർ
കുന്നംകുളം ഉപജില്ല
തൃശ്ശൂർ
അക്ഷരവൃക്ഷം പദ്ധതി, 2020
കഥ

സാങ്കേതിക പരിശോധന - Sunirmaes തീയ്യതി: 19/ 04/ 2020 >> രചനാവിഭാഗം - കഥ

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-Once upon a time there lived a small young girl named Lisa she was very naughty not a clean at all. when all her friends having fun playing in the water would sit alone. Unlike others.   She hated getting wet.  One day due to heavy showers. There was muddy water everywhere. Lisa to became dirty and mud was covered on her body. “oh no”
+Once upon a time there lived a small young girl named Lisa. She was very naughty, not  clean at all. when all her friends having fun playing in the water, she would sit alone. Unlike others she hated getting wet.  One day due to heavy showers, there was muddy water everywhere. Lisa became dirty and mud was covered on her body. “oh no”
-I don’t like to dirty when the rain stopped Lisa saw all her friends bathing in the river. Even she was also needed to both. She stepped into the river. All the mud was washed away. The water feels good. Said by Lisa. As soon she found herself having fun with her friends. From that day on wards she bathed and play along with all her friends in river.
+I don’t like to dirty. When the rain stopped Lisa saw all her friends bathing in the river. Even she was also needed to bathe. She stepped into the river. All the mud was washed away. The water feels good. Said Lisa. Soon she found herself having fun with her friends. From that day on wards she  started to bath and played along with her friends in river.
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